Thursday, June 7, 2012

Adengapa 3 peru!!! ==> Part 2


Part-2 konjam perusu thaan.. It's just to get into the grip..
So Part-2’la Karthi family pathi oru kutti intro’oda varuvam…

Ithu thaan Karthi family.. Amma veetla thaan irrukanga, Appa business aparam oru sister peru Harini… Ah Harini college third year poranga…

Leaveku vantha yaena pannuvanga saaptu saaptu thoonguvanga… atha thaan namma herovum rendu naal panaru.. ippa Sunday night vanthachu thirumba kilambararu…

Amma: Karthi ini poitu yaepa da varuva…
Karthi: Therila ma. athukula adutha project vanthurum.. work yaepadinu pathutu thaan plan pannanum…

Harini: Vidu ma avan thaan scene podrana neeyum atha kaetutu irruka..

Karthi: Hey yaena de overa pesara…

Harini: Apdiyanga sir… neenga Friday night bus’la yaena pannenganu niyabagam irruka…

Amma: Yaena da aachu.. ava yaena soldra….

Karthi : Onnu illa ma ava thaan loosu mathiri olaritu irruka..

Amma ulla poitanga….

Karthi: Unna mathuchu sonnen parru… enna sollanum.

Harini: Summasonnathukae patharita antha bayam irrukatum.. avala thirumbavum patha poi pesu da.. loosu mathiri vitratha….

Karthi: Oh advice panrengala athu ellam naanga pathukaranga madam neenga polam…

Harini: atha naangalum pakka thaana poram…

Karthi’s dad enters the scene…

Dad: Karthi kilambalama…

Karthi: Ah itho kilambitae irrukan.. aana naanae poiran pa yaethuku neenga avlo thoorma vanthutu…

Dad: naan inga yaena panna poren, antha pakkam oru vela irruku atha apdiae unna vittutu poiran..

Karthi: Seri pa.. itho 5 minsla ready aayiran…

Karthi and his dad left to bus… Karthi boarded the bus…. Harini yaarayo sonnangalae athu yaara irrukum… Hmmmm pakkalam athu yaarunu….

Karthi reached his room in Bangalore. The day went as usual. Viki Karthi roomla irrunthanga aparam Kokku Kumar officela irrunthu innum varala… After dinner Karthi logged into Orkut… (2005’la FB ivlo famous aagalae:-P). Payapula oru thanga name’a search pannitae irrunthaan.. Appa thaan permutaion combination ellam niyabagam vanthu pala possiblities pottu search pannitu irrunthan face’la vera oru paraparapu.. atha pathi Viki lite’a shock aayitan..

Viki: Machi yaenada aachu.. oru vithama screen’a pathutu irruka enna vittutu puthusa yaena da pakkara..

Karthi: illa machi oru thanga orkut profile’a theditu irrukan…

Viki: ORUTHANGALA… ipdi mariyatha kudukarana yaaru antha ponnu…

Karthi: Athu yaepadi machi correct’a ponnu’nu sonna..

Viki: aama nee yaepa payasam kudipa yaepa kaluvi oothuvanu engaluku theriyatha matterku va… Yaaru antha figure…

Karthi: dai decenta sollu da.. ava paeru vanthu Shruthi… Annaiku ooruku pogum pothu pathan…

Viki: Oh decent’a.. Neenga mela sollunga Mr.Decent..

Karthi: athu oru cute story da..

Viki: nee kathaya mattum sollu athu cute’a illa kandraviyanu naanga pathukaram..

Kutti flashback thaan…

Friday night..
Bus stopped in a tea shop for refreshments… Karthi got water bottle and washed his face….
Appa avan kathula konjam sweet’a ‘anna oru water bottle kudunga’nu kaetuchu….
Avanga water bottle vangitu poitanga. Aana namma hero pinnadiae ponaru. 
Athirstam athirstamnu onnu solluvanga therima athu annaiku namma hero pakkam thaan. yaena antha ponnu yeruna bus’la irrunthu Karthi’oda school friend Prabu irangunan. Bali aadu sikkiyachu so ini nadanthatha pappom.

Karthi: Machi yaepadi da irruka.

Prabu: dai naan nalla irrukan da.. unna pathu yaevlo naal aachu.

Karthi: seri da atha vidu.. ennaku nee oru help pannanum da.

Prabu: Sollu machi.

Karthi: neeyum coimbatore thaan pora naanum anga thaan poran. antha bus’um anga thaan poguthu so nee athula en seat’la va naan ithula un seat’la varan.

Prabu: Yaen da?? Yaen intha vibaretham!!

Karthi: Machi ithula oru ponna pathan da. athu thaan… nee athula va da… purunjuko…

Prabu: seri po poi vaalu…

Prabu and Karthi changed their buses. Patha antha ponnuku parallel seat’ae. Aparam yaepadi thookam varum. Thalaivar summavae illae. Konja nerathula ellarum thoongitan.

Karthi: Pesama elupi vittu pesiru da.. dai decent decent..  illa Karthi oru silar’a thaan da patha udanae pesanumnu thonum.. yaena ninachalum paravala pesu da..

Namma aalum oru valiya pesa ready aagi.. apdiae steady aanan.. appa thaan DAMMMAL’nu satham

Karthi: Yaenada satham namma ellam ipdi yosika kudatha.. yaarukum porukathae..

Bus puncture aagi nikkuthu...

Karthi: Anna yaepa vandi edupenga… illa vera vali yaethachu irruka…
Driver: Sorry Sir Spare Tyre illa vera vandi vara yaepadio oru 2 hrs aayrum… Avasaram’na yaethachu bus vantha kilambirunga Sir.

Ellarum Spare busku wait pannitu irrunthanga… aana Karthi yaarukaga vanthano avanga romba tensed’a irrunthanga.

Karthi: Yaarukum onnum aagalae aparam yaen tensed’a irrkenga….

Yaentha answerum varalae….

Karthi: Illa konjam nervous’a irrunthengalanu kaetan thappa eduthukathenga…

Shruthi: Athu illa. kalaila 6 mani kula naan yaepadiachu ooruku poganum athu thaan.

Karthi: Naanum neramae thaanga poganum anga important work irruku (summa vida maatanae). vena yaethachu bus’a niruthi pappama.

Shruthi: Yaepadi. ivlo per irrukanga.. 

Karthi: Summa antha turn varaikum nadakalam… anga yaethachu bus vanthuchuna poiralam…

Shruthi: Illa vaendam paravala…!!!!

Karthi: Yaenga enna nambala.

No reply from her side.

Karthi: Yaenga polama…???

Shruthi: Hmmmm….

Karthi keela vada, paranthathu pothum…

Karthi: Unga per yaena…
Shruthi: Illa paravala…

Karthi(mind voice): machi insult da ini yaethum pesa kudathu… over scene..
  
Namma hero paavam nose cut’oda anga irrunthu oru vandiya puduchu vanthutaru… Seri avlo thaanu ninachu vittutan…

After reaching Coimbatore

Shruthi: Thanks Mr???
Karthi: Karthi.. Karthi Subramaniyan… Welcome Ms…????

Shruthi: Ms. Shruthi.

Karthi: OhJ seringa Bye.. Pakkalam…
Shruthi: Bye..

(Ah it’s time to come back to normal..)

Karthi: Yaepadi machi..

Viki: Kandravi thaan.. en nilamaiya sonnen da.. ini unnayum thirutha mudiyathu.. athu yaepadi da patha udanae ipdi ellam thonumo..

Karthi: Machi profile’a kandu puduchutamla.. Itho parru da ithu thaan.. Friend list’a pakkaranae..

Viki: oh naan sonnatha neenga kaetkavae illa.. Pathu da screen’a kulipatiratha.. lap ennuthu..

Karthiku Heartattackae vanthuruchu...

Karthi: Dai nee yaepadi da iva friendlistla..

Viki: Naana yaenga kaami... ada pavi ivala pathi thaan sollitu irrunthiya.. Machi Iva en friend thaan da. Inga thaan Ecospace’la irruka. oru media companyla work panra… photoshop athu ithunu sema interest athu thaan media side vanthuta… oru ad companyla chief designer’a irruka…

Karthi: Machi un friend’nu oru visiting card kudaen..

Viki: dai iva apdi ellam illa da. sema reserved type. avlava pesa maata. She is a homely girl so better avoid her.

Karthi: Theriyumae.. Paer thaan da kaetan athukae avlo neram aayruchu. aana reserved type aparam yaethuku Orkut..

Viki: Dai atha open panni parru athula onnum irrukathu.. athae namma kokku aal profile open panni parru naari poi irrukum.. ithu nadakathu machi..

Kokku is back from office and he comes into the scene…

Kokku: Dai yaenada en aal’a pathi yaetho sollitu irruntha mathiri irrunthuchu..

Viki: Onnum illa machi un aal kula vilaku da avangala pathi pesuvana.. Karthi padam ottitu irrunthan..

Kokku: Yaenada Karthi yaena matter-u..

Karthi: machi athu oru periya katha da..

Viki: ada pavi ippa thaan da kaetu muduchan.

Karthi: Thirumba kaelu..

Viki: Naan intha aatathuku varala aala vidu. nee kelu da kokku vaya.

Hmmmmm Karthi namma Kumarta nadanthatha sollatum namma adutha part-la meet pannalam. Part-3 is gearing up.


PS: Trying to improve my narration. Hope it’s soJ

Tuesday, May 15, 2012

Adengapa 3 peru!!! ==> Part 1

Apdiae 2005ku odi poi intha storya oatta poren..


 
Intha story oru 3 pasangala pathi.. 3 Perum Sillunu Oru Kadal Surya padicha PSB College, Coimbatorela paducha pasanga...
Veli ulagathuku oru ninapu "PSB'la paduchu Vela confirmnu"...
Aana engaluku thaana theriyum QCS, CQS, Manfosys maharaja engala eduthu USlayo UKlayo irruka Maha Maharajakita kai kaluvi vittruvanganu...
Ithu athu mathiri oru kootathula irruka oru 3 pasangaloda katha thaan... Bangalorela irrukangalan...
Antha 3 per ivanga thaan Viki, Karthi (oru collnu irruntha anga Karthinu oru than irrnthu thaana aaganum athu thaana niyayam:-P) aparam 'Kokku' Kumar..
Ah aparam yaenada Bangalorela irruka ellarum Tamil thaan pesuvangalanu kaetka kudathu yaena namma Tamil padathula ellam yaentha oornalum Tamil thaan pesuvam:-P


Viki: Hey dude wat's up man...
Kokku: Vanthutanda Harry Potter vayan.. yaenda nee ellam vilangavae maatiya.. olunga pesu da...
Viki: vidu machi.. ipdi pesunavathu yaethachu madiyumnu thaan..
Kokku: athu thaan set aagalala aparam yaen.. machi namma 3 per thalaila motta pasanganu eluthiruku yaena panna.. correct pannavanuku oru figure thaan sontham aana namakku pakkarathu ellam figure machi..
Viki: dai decenta pesu da. am educated family you see.
Kokku: ada pavi **** *****.
Viki: theriyama sollitan da vidu. seri antha Karthi payan yaenga da aalavae kaanam.
Kokku: Machi ithu yaena masam. April da. Appraisalngara perla avanga yaetho seivina vachutanga pola. manthuruchu vitta mathiriae suthitu irrukan..
Viki: Ithu theriyama pochae. avanuku oru call'a podu machi.

Kokku call'a potta udanae hello tune : "910 rooba katha kelunga..." from anbe sivam..

Viki: ha ha namma aala aduchuka mudiyathu da Kokku. anubavuchu paatu vachurukan...
Call attended..
Kokku: dai yaena da pattu ellam balama irruku..
Karthi: dai verupethatha
Kokku: seri yaenga irruka.
 
Calling bell sound.
 
Karthi: itho bell adikuthu parru. Naan thaan vanthu kathava thora.
Kokku: ada nara payalae. nillu varan.
 
Karthi joins the scene.
 
Karthi: machi pesama naan oorukae poiralamnu irrukan da.
Viki: yaen da
Karthi: pinna yaenada naanum oru naal'la 18hrs work panran. goodnu soldranga aana mathika kuda maatikaranga.
Kokku: yaenda. antha mangoose mandayan yaena sonnan.
Karthi: machi antha work ellam avan thaan panna mathiri scene podran da. Intelligence report solluthu avnauku mattum 18% aana ennaku verum 6% da. percent kuda second da aana avan podra scene thanga mudila.
Viki: aama ithae thaan pona varusham sonna. poda poi thookatha podu ellam seri aayidum.
Karthi: illa machi naan ooruku kilambaran. trainla ticket irrukanu parru.
Kokku: boss comedy panrenga. athu thaan avan avan train'a kuthakaiku edutha mathiri 2 masathuku munnadiae kadan vangiaachu book panniranungalae.
Karthi: poda *****.
Viki: dai tension aagatha da. intha ithu oru travels number aduchu kelu.

Karthi dails.
 
Karthi: annan coimbatoreku bus irruka na. innaiku night poga ticket venumna.
Travels: thambi today friday night so konjam kastam. wait pannu naan yaengayachuu kaetu soldren.
Karthi: serina oru 10 nimishathula koopadran.

After 15 mins.
 
Karthi: anna ticket irruka na.
Travels: irruku pa. non-ac semi-sleeper 550rs.
Karthi: seringana naan Vikioda friend thaan. ticket eduthu vainga naan vanthu kasu kudutharan.
Travels: seri pa.

Call ended.

Karthi: Machi ticket irrukan da naan appa pack pannitu kilambaran.
Viki: seri da. aana return ticket?
Karthi: appa kita sollirukan da. avaru poi book panranu sonnaru.
Kokku: paavam avaruku kastam thaan. returnum ingae nammalae book panra mathiri ittuntha nalla irrukum.. yaena panna vera vali illa..
Karthi: mokka podatha da. naan kilambaran.
Kokku: feel panni sonna mokka podrana. po da po bus urupadiya irrukathu po. bye.
Viki: avana vidu da. en influence machi raja mathiri ooruku pova parru. bye.
Karthi: rendu perkum bye da

Karthi comes to bus stand.
A scene from travels office. There the travels guy contacts some three or four guys and then he books a ticket. Another person approached him to cancel the ticket but the travels guy sounded harsh saying it's impossible for him to pass on the ticket as he got ticket through another person and it's simply impossible.
After few minutes Karthi started conversation with the travels guy.


Karthi: yaenana unga vandiku mattum thaan inga booking eh illa yaepadi.
Travels: illa pa athu mathiri book panna yaenga porathu. 4-5 travels contactla irruku apdiae mathi mathi vandi odum pa.
Karthi: athula ungaluku yaenana labam?
Travels: yaevlo ticket book panni tharano athuku yaetha mathiri commission kidaikum pa.
Karthi: seringana. yaepanae en bus varum?
Travels: itho majestic'la irrunthu kilambi romba neram aachae. itho vanthuruchae antha sivapu colour bus thaan.
Karthi: thanks na. pakkalam.

Karthi later boarded the bus and the conversation with the travels guy and the happenings there kept his brain cells busy.
Kumar's thought of booking return tickets too got struck his thought.
Before reaching Coimbatore the thoughts bloomed as the questions "WHY NOT LET EVERYONE GRAB THE TICKETS FROM ANYWHERE??" "WHY NOT LET EVERYONE TO REPLAN HIS TRIP???"
He just wanted this questions to be answered. But the vacation is to forget the Mangoose mandayan..:-P



PS: Ah Part-2'vil Santhipom...Your comments will help me to sharpen my narration...:-)
   Suggestions for title is open..:-)